tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post3669548569341269370..comments2024-01-06T01:27:02.636-08:00Comments on Early Bird & Night Owl: "i got the black lung, pa" - a poetic narrativeJessie Popehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06488095131762581182noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-56063288963584388632014-03-14T11:39:37.578-07:002014-03-14T11:39:37.578-07:00This is fantastic. "So is throw up, like, a s...This is fantastic. "So is throw up, like, a score?" had me giggling in the middle of my otherwise silent office. Corley Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00666421374390756168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-44307333058193494552014-02-07T18:42:27.110-08:002014-02-07T18:42:27.110-08:00Woman. I loved it. You are such a wonderful writer...Woman. I loved it. You are such a wonderful writer. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03547427850716012193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-83863032054894421332014-02-04T18:56:05.751-08:002014-02-04T18:56:05.751-08:00I'm so sorry you were sick (I'm afraid of ...I'm so sorry you were sick (I'm afraid of vomit as well) but I love this post. Francinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05904134944835186397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-83062778547899001562014-02-04T08:19:57.252-08:002014-02-04T08:19:57.252-08:00The kids gifted me great naps yesterday and I used...The kids gifted me great naps yesterday and I used it to write poetry instead of clean my home.<br />The National...so good. I know more lyrics to that song, but those were the only ones going through my head because I was just feeling sorry for myself :)Jessie Popehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06488095131762581182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-70534621207185472902014-02-04T07:10:50.724-08:002014-02-04T07:10:50.724-08:00Excellent one, Jess! Sorry it hit your house.Excellent one, Jess! Sorry it hit your house.Needled Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749314475716010490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-10267405378770761482014-02-04T05:35:17.942-08:002014-02-04T05:35:17.942-08:00You are quite the talented poet!! So sorry you gu...You are quite the talented poet!! So sorry you guys were sick but at least you've penned a nice poem to remember it by! :)Beth Cotellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14536268080265726705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-49576575454128206312014-02-03T22:31:55.596-08:002014-02-03T22:31:55.596-08:00Haha! Wow. I have never been good at poetry so I a...Haha! Wow. I have never been good at poetry so I am super impressed by you. <br /><br />I'm glad that it has passed.<br />I hope your good health lasts. <br />I'm trying to rhyme, <br />but I'm not taking enough time. <br />To make it sound good. <br />But I'm glad you found a way new way to part your hair.<br />Okay, bye.chalaynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04588631608351614332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8944575255695701955.post-59838879645871202582014-02-03T20:03:10.604-08:002014-02-03T20:03:10.604-08:00Ha! Wow, this was amazing. I don't even want t...Ha! Wow, this was amazing. I don't even want to know how long this took you. I am glad you are better...and I love that song by The National.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com